a perfect gold vase

Invisible Vases

“The whole point is you’re making this beautiful, invisible vase.”  –Kim Stanley Robinson at Clarion 2013. These words have stayed with me since I heard them last summer. The first draft of a story is rather like putting clay on the wheel. It’s… fast. You have this SHAPE now. You Read more…

a very abstract and weird vase

Mud

For the purposes of this post, stories are vases. Not all vases are the same, though.  One problem with soliciting advice for improving your story can be that the person you talk to wants a different vase altogether. “I wrote a heartwarming human-interest story!”   “It needs more action.” “Here’s Read more…

cartoon of a woman trying to put a drawer that obviously won't fit into a dresser

Low Self-Esteem

So, this really happened. I was helping my friend Mike  move, and I had stacked the dresser drawers in opposite order so I could put them back in easily.  The three drawers were all different sizes. I took the bottom drawer, which was largest, out last, so it was on Read more…